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Tuesday, 29 April 2014

The Little Crooked Tale Chapter Twelve: White As Snow 23/23








































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  1. very good

    somehow i don't think that's aurora, but someone else in disguise

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  2. I can't wait for the next pages to come out. IM SO EXCITED!!!

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  3. I so love what you do with these characters. LOVE LOVE LOVE .
    The time you take must be exhausting. But, the pages show it's well worth it.
    Every time you post another part I'm so excited, and just want more....

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    1. Thanks a lot :)
      It's true it takes a certain effort but I like giving a good result.

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  4. I love how you drew jasmine with her hair down! It's so pretty!

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  5. This is going better and better! IT would be so wonderfull if Disney makes oficial this comic series...

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    1. Thanks but I think it's too mature for Disney...

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  6. I love seeing Jasmine with her hair down as well! Love this series..can't wait to see more :D

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  7. Something tells me that isn't Aurora...It must be Maleficent in disguise! The wallpaper, how you said this chapter is going to be about all of the princesses except Aurora...It all makes sense now!

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    1. My guess is she's going to try to trick Jasmine into giving her the slipper by claiming its her stolen object.

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    2. The main character of chapter 13 will be Jasmine so maybe we'll know it soon ;)

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    3. My favorite princess with my lucky number. Sweet! ;)

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  8. Why would Aurora tell someone her name is Briar Rose instead of Aurora? I know that was her name in the movie, but shouldn't a princess say her real name instead?

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    1. Do you think she is the real Aurora?

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    2. Does Maleficent know that Aurora went by Briar Rose? Also what do Phillip and Aurora's parents normally call her?

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    3. Stefan and Leah call her Aurora. As for Phillip...well, 'Sleeping Beauty' was his nickname for her. But I think he did say Aurora once, just before he died. Only the fairies call her Rose.

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  9. Isn't Ariel Danish?

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    1. She's a mermaid, I don't think she has a nacionality o.o

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  10. Ahhhh update!!!!! :D

    Oh gosh I missed your comic so much xD

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  11. I agree that Jasmine looks beautiful with her hair down. Say, is that dress Arabian style or is it just something you designed for her?

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  12. Awesome update!!! :) Love your style and Jasmine's dress is gorgeous. When will the next update be?

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  13. Jasmine is my favorite princess too! I'm pretty much obsessed with her and aladdin :)

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  14. Ariel, in that world you're young and single again, you CANNOT say no! OMG what a man!! Sorry Eric, your wife needs a break!
    PD: I LOVE Lottie's cameo xDDDD

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    1. Thanks for your honest comment xD

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  15. oh no I hope Adam is doing what I think he's doing ;A;

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    1. What do you mean o.o?

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    2. being a *cough* swinger *cough*

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  16. Is this the same Lottie that friends with Tiana or an alternate version of Lottie living in the "Beauty and the Beast" world???

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    1. It's a joke with an alternative Lottie :)

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    2. Could it possibly be one of Lottie's ancestors? After all she is French (La Bouff) so this woman could have been one of Lottie's ancestors that just happened to live in 18th Century France w/Belle and Adam.

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    3. It's not that complicated xD. It's only a funny cameo.

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  17. Is Ariel giggling because she sees Sebastian in Charlotte's (Lottie) hair? :P

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    1. It's because of the scene of Lottie flirting with Adam :)

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  18. haha gotta love sexual puns.....need a good gardener to prune/trim your roses ;) *wink wink*

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    1. It's a fact, he is too sexy to resist. Poor Ariel haha ;)

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    2. Thanks for your comments xD.

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    3. I don't get it :/

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    4. It's a sexual proposition.

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    6. Yes, we're all adults but moderate your words, please...

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    7. Oh oops sorry. I didn't know if I could actually explain what the sexual act he was implying meant and what not...but anyway sorry again.

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  19. Omg Lottie!!! I love her XD
    That guy is handsome but such a MORON!!! PUNCH HIM ARIEL!!! >:(

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    1. I love Lottie :)
      Poor gardener xD.

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  20. Wait... If Sebastian is in Lottie's hair that means that he traveled with Ariel to Beauty and the Beast world! And that means that Ariel has a friend from Little mermaid world with her!!!

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    1. No, Sebastian is just an accesory xD,

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  21. loving this chapter already i cant wait 2 c wat happens next

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  22. I remember seeing Princess and the Frog and thinking Charlotte was going to be really annoying but I ended up liking her for her quirkiness. While she was spoiled, she turned out to not be much of a brat and really cared about her friendship with Tiana.

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    1. I think the same. She's the best character of the movie for me.

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  23. waitwaitwaitwait...THAT GUY IS ANDRE' GRANDIER FROM "THE ROSE OF VERSAILLES" D: DA FUQ MAN! YOU SAID YOU LOVED ONLY OSCAR ç_ç

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    1. Haha it's not him, but I suposse they share the same hairstyle xD.

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  24. Resist Ariel! Resist! Remember you only LOVE Eric!!! XD

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    1. Me too xD

      But your story is really interesting and I love how the princesses change ^^ Suerte para continuar!!

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  25. sweet, nice lottie cameo

    ariel! slap that guy in the face!

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  26. Will ariel be changing into a mermaid of she gets water on her? That would be so cool!!!

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    1. It's not really practical for the main story. But in determinated circumstances maybe she'll change :)

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    2. That will be be so cool! Belle will be all, "OH MY GOSH YOU HAVE A TAIL!!!" And Ariel will be all, "did i forget to tell you I'm a mermaid? Sorry."

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  27. OMG, Is that a grown, mature Red Rose?
    I love your story by the way!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    1. Thanks! We'll see who is this lady ;)

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  28. Poor Ariel, what a pair of bit**es! Anyway, is that woman an important character? She's gorgeous!
    And I LOVE all the dresses and that Snow White's portrait! Keep the amazing work!

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    1. Thanks a lot! And you're right, the new lady is a important character.

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  29. It's amazing the effort you put in all the little details of your designs, everything is really beautiful :)

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  30. wow! Ariel is so goregous.. Anyway, who is the lady wear red gown and talking about the book with Belle? :)

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    1. We'll know more about her in this chapter :)

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  31. Oh Oh Oh ........ maybe the lady with black hair and dark lips is another villain in disguise >:D hahaa its quite possible *waggles eyebrows*

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  32. The Duchess is beautiful! But her eyes are creepy... I think she's a kind of witch, fairy or supernatural creature. Those eyes are not human eyes. But anyway she's beautiful.
    Poor Ariel! I'd love to slap those stupid girls. She really was found during a snow storm!
    And I love Snow White's picture at the castle ^.^

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    1. We'll know more about her in this chapter :)
      Thanks for your comment!

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  33. Love the Snow White painting in the "Beauty and the Beast" world!! :D

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  34. Ehm...Ovid was one of the most famous Roman poets, not greek xD

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    1. It was a language mistake o.o. What I meant to say was the book is composed by greek myths xD.
      Thanks for for advising me!

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  35. this is so awesome! i have a bunch of questions!
    will giselle appear in TLCT?
    is duchess a human or something else and is she evil?
    will tiana appear in this chapter?
    will we find out what merlin wanted to say to fairies and aurora in this chapter?
    is duchess a vampire?( i'm kinda obsessed with vampires)
    is she the one ''white as snow'' like the chapter's name or is it snow white?

    i loved lottie's cameo and those beautiful dresses and snow's portrait!
    i'm sorry for too many questions, i hope you can answer some of them if not all, when will the next update be?

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    1. So many questions xD
      I only can give you these anwers:
      -Giselle will appear.
      -Tiana will appear, but not in this chapter as a cameo, she'll have her own story.
      -Aurora and Merlin will apeerar in the next chapter.

      The next update will be very soon :)

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    2. So the actual Giselle will appear??? Can't wait!! XD

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    3. Fairytale Giselle? or real live Giselle? or, before of after Giselle left Andalasia (sp?)?

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    4. After and animated :)

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    5. I thought Giselle only cameo as Rose Red's doll. Looking forward to see Giselle appear in TLCT, both in her Andalasia form and NYC form. Can't wait! XD

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  36. Is the duchess an original character? If or if not, I have some ideas on who she is or who she is based on.

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  37. I have a feeling the Duchess knows of Ariel's situation and that she's not from Belle's universe, I can't wait to see how she plays into the story. Just, please tell me that horny gardener isn't going to appear again XD

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    1. Poor gardener, he is just an honest person xD.

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  38. Congratulation for this whom work so hard! Hope keep it up :D Oh, Is Cinderella in Snow White's world? I feel like I familiar the duchess, is she VANESSA?

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    1. Thanks! And no, she's not Vanessa :)

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    2. Oh i know i got mistake guess.. On cover, the girl who you put her as silhouettes, is she Rose, daughter of Snow White from future? :)

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    3. No, she is the Duchess :)

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  39. Any idea on what happened to Jaq and Gus?

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    1. They're in Snow White's castle.

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  40. i'm sure of this:
    duchess rougelle is the silhouette on the cover of chapter 12 and the lady in the red dress with long black hair ...and the necklace where ariels voice was! now i'm confused maybe she was also a mermaid so that's why she likes them or she's another sea witch! she seems kinda evil on that pic so a label her as 'evil'

    can't wait for the next update your comic is the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    1. The lady in the red dress and the Duchess are differente characters xD

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  41. precious? that's how the old witch refered to aurora, maybe that really isn't cinderella?

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    1. She's the real Cinderella :)

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    2. few! i'm too sispicious sometimes :)

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  42. Rougelle's talk of mermaids was rather cryptic. I'm sure she is not who she says she is. I still have a couple guesses on who she is. One thing I'm pretty sure of is that she is the girl in the silhouettes on the chapter cover and header (in the mirror).

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    1. Well, you're right in that two things xD.

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  43. How exactly did Cinderella get her memories back?

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    1. She doesn't get her memories back, just a single scene.

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    2. So she only remembers her childhood? If I'm wrong, what parts of her life does she do remember?

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    3. Just that part, nothing else for the moment.

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  44. Does Cinderella still have that stone head of her fairy godmother?

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    1. Maybe it will help her regain what she lost. did she lose her memories because of trauma?

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    2. No, it's for another reason :)

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  45. When's your next update? :)

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  46. I hope Snow White doesn't think Cinderella is evil or anything...

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  47. Say, I've only just noticed this but Cinderella looks exactly like Alice in the flashback :)

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    1. They have a similar animation style but they don't look the same to me.

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    2. Really? I think the way you drew the younger Cinderella, particularly in the first panel on the 13 page looks just like Alice. In a good way, of course.

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  48. When will you make another character poster?

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    1. I'm not sure yet but probably soon.

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  49. I love this chapter, your designs are amazing and the story is going better and better. Will you update this week? :DDD

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  50. I'm not sure Cinderella is going to listen to talking mice...

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  51. Look at Snow White and Cinderella getting along so well! I love it! :) Are they going to get to know each other better? They both have a lot in common. Jealous stepmothers, deceased fathers, were mistreated because of their beauty, both love animals...They could relate very well. :)

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  52. Who is that black shadow in the first panel on the red background on page 15?

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    1. This panel:
      http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-o6Bhc0wZDXI/Ue2xzcdPWDI/AAAAAAAADIM/vk5BqWzECbo/s1600/8+11.jpg

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  53. This is a really good comic , will there be a happy ending

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    1. There'll be an ending ;)

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    2. when will the evil queen come in this comic

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    3. She appeared in chapter 9.

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  55. Cinderella and Snow White look great together, especially since they have similar backstories.

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  56. OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG THE WAND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  57. i don't know but i think maybe this Aurora is one of the good fairies in disguise, i think i'm wrong. Also, i love your comic so much!

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  58. Cinderella's Fairy Godmother must have transferred all her powers into Cinderella! O.O Now that's a great plot twist!

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  59. Will Mulan be in your story?

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  60. Cinderella's not going to say "Bibbidi-bobbidi-boo!" everytime she uses that magic wand, right? Cause that would make everything seem less serious... XD

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  61. This is simply amazing, I want moreee!! :DDD

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  62. I can't wait till the next chapter! When will the new pages be out?

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  63. LOCK THE DOOR, ARIEL! DON'T LET THAT DUCHESS IN! D:

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  64. That 2nd panel with Ariel thinking about Ursula- gosh she's so pretty!! I can't wait for more *_*

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  65. I don't want to seem rude but there is a small language mistake you keep repeating. In English, "Good Night" is a dismissal, not a greeting. We usually say that when we go to bed. The nighttime greeting is "Good Evening". I commend how well you are able to write the dialogue in this comic in three languages. you do a terrific job.

    On another, different matter, I guess we will now learn if the Duchess is friend or foe.

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    1. Don't worry, thanks a lot for your help, of course :)

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  66. What the Duchess's so important to say to Ariel? Knows where she is Melody?
    Ariel she wants to participate in a conspiracy against Belle and his family? Is it perhaps a mermaid too.

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    1. Why a conspiracy against Belle? O.o

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    2. I thought about it during the day and probably Adam fortune or power factor could be a conspiracy. Wealth and power are two things that every known villains trying to get. According to me, behind his mask of nice woman could be that of a manipulative woman. But this option is not one I would have wanted to have a discussion

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  67. BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOBS- I mean, nice shading!

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  68. it just keeps gettin better n better

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  69. Next update?

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  70. Am I the only one who thinks that the duchess might be a good person? Why don't we just give her a chance :3

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  71. Have you seen Maleficent? :)

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    1. Yes, and in my opinion it has been a waste of time and money...

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  72. When your next update?

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  73. The Duchess knows Ariel's a mermaid O_O

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  74. So, through out the comic, I've seen foreshadowing of Sweet Rose red getting hurt. I do know there is a old medieval song called 'Rose red', that maybe you could somehow put into the story. I'm not saying you have to, but I'm just telling you that there is a song.

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    1. That's interesting but where can I find it?

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  75. Seeing how each princess is being mentally tortured through their loved ones, I'm detecting one will happen with Belle through Adam, or should I say his beastly alter-ego? :3

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    1. We'll see but each case will be different ;)

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  76. Wait, wait, SNOW WHITE? Is she really Snow White? Maybe she is a future descendant... Or a witch form of Snow White? This is turning amazing!!

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  77. I don't know if she is Snow White or not, but she is really gorgeous *o*

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  78. Snow White and Rose Red....are you by chance going off of the Grimm Fairytales? :D If so I would love to see what happens with Ariel *eats popcorn*

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    1. If you mean the comic series from Zenescope, it's not the same case xD.

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  79. Unless you are going with other-world counterparts, I don't think she's Snow White, but is probably related. One thing I'm sure of is this is the person that aggravated Grimhilde in chapter 9. There is also the thing about sorcery running in Snow's family so I'm sure she's a witch. For weeks I've been coming up with theories about this lady. Ranging from being a time-traveling Rose Red to Snow White's mother not really being dead. It's really getting to me. It's fun, really.

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    1. Everybody is conected xD. Well, we have a lot of time for knowing more about this charming lady :)

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    2. Is she a Snow White's cousin or Is she her descendant
      (Sorry, Keybord problem)

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  80. Ahh it's the evil queen in disguise!!! OoO

    I say there is trickery afoot!! >:d
    now Jasmine and Ariel better watch their backs >_<

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    1. No, she's not the queen, as I said many times xD.

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    2. Oh sorry, I didn't see those comments....

      hmmm....who and what could she be.....

      lol I still say trickery is afoot!! Using those names, very suspicious >:)

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  81. She wants to be Ariel's friend huh? There's something fishy about her......when will the next update be?

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