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Tuesday, 29 July 2014

The Little Crooked Tale Chapter Thirteen: The Seven Sins 27/27













































283 comments:

  1. DarleenEnchanted29 July 2014 at 20:36

    Oh, I just can't wait to see more! Now I really wonder how Berthalda lost everything she loved. I can feel sorry for her loss. Even though she a little scares me. xD
    I really like connection between Ondine and Ariel.
    And I also see that Aurora will have a braid in this chapter. Cool! <3

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    1. Berthalda's life was hard, that's true. We'll know the details in the future :)

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  2. I knew it. the blonde in the preview was the water nymph Ondine (also spelled as Undine or Undina). I figured the connection with Ariel was they are both creatures of the sea who fell in love with humans. I looked into the story and found Berthalda seduced the man into betraying Ondine like in Swan Lake.

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    1. Technically Berthalda was the Hans' fiancee before Ondine was. So was Ondine who seduced Hans, not Berthalda. Ondina betrays Berthalda in many points of the original story too. From my own point of view, Ariel and Ondine were a little selfish in their attitude with many characters of their respective stories.

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    2. Yeah, that's right. he was engaged to Berthalda first and he left her. Berthalda sought revenge and got him to marry her to get back at Ondine... and then Ondine had him killed for breaking her heart. accident or on purpose depends on the version. Was it accidental here or is that a spoiler?

      what you just said about Ariel is one of many reasons why she was never one of my favorite disney girls. her attitude made me unable to relate to her, even as a child.

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  3. Wow can't wait to see more of these characters! They are so intriguing.

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  4. Berthalda strangled Ondine because she killed her husband? But how? By the way, Ondine looks like she's really sorry, like she didn't meant to kill anyone. And she's beautiful! Can't wait to see more about this chapter.

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    1. That is a long story to be told here... You can read the full story here:
      http://www.publicbookshelf.com/fantasy-paranormal/undine/fisherman-knight

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    2. Thank you :3

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  5. i love this comics , when is the next update ? =)

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  6. You mentioned earlier that each of the villains have different circumstances and are using a different evil. That got me suspecting that each of them will represent the seven sins in the title.

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    1. You will know soon what means the name of this chapter ;)

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  7. Wow this is amazing! Can't wait to see more! :)

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  8. I love the "Fake Aurora's" arabian look :D
    Sooo pretty!!

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    1. Thanks! She wears the same dress than Jasmine on the cover :)

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    2. Oh nice :D I also really like the way you drew her hair tied up. It looks very nice :)

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  9. You make Jasmine seem kinda mean :/

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    1. Not really. Jasmine has been through a lot( movie, sequels and series). She's more cautious and suspicious :)

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    2. Will Jasmine be that hostile when she meet the real Aurora??

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    3. Sonne, are you a fan of the sequels/ and or series? are you acknowledging or using characters from them?

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  10. Wasn't her name Undine instead of Ondine?

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    1. Her original name is Ondine. Undine or Ondina are just another translations of her name. But her original name is that one.

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  11. Noooooo......Aladdin WHYYY!!!! Why did you tell her Jasmine has the glass slipper in her room >_<

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    1. Well.. Aladdin always has been a nice guy. He just tried to be kind with Aurora, but his naivety blind his mind sometimes.

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  12. So, is Aurora's kingdom in Jasmine's world(somewhere far away) or is her kingdom from another world?

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    1. Jasmine's kingdom is in a different world than Aurora's kingdom, and the worlds are not connected between them.

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  13. Did she just...??! O.O

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  14. Ohh hella no you didn't Maleficent!!!! >:O
    Hold my earrings...Imma slap a B*TCH up in here!! xD

    lawlz

    Cool to see Aladdin's dad in here too!! :)

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    1. That was funny but that Aurora is not Maleficent... I'm glad you like Aladdin's dad appearance ;D.

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    2. what??? but but i was sure that was maleficent in disguise!
      hmmmm i'm sure that's not the real aurora but then who else could that be?

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    3. We basically already figured out that that is not the real Aurora. Majority of us think its Maleficent because of the wallpaper with Jasmine scared and Aurora with the glowing green eyes. So its either Maleficent disguised as Aurora or it is Aurora being possessed by Maleficent. It has to be one of those, because there are no other villains who's eyes glow green.

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  15. i kinda new she'd do that but it was still suprising

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  16. Nooooooooo don't tell me that was some kind of poisonous kiss!

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    1. Dont worry, Aladdin is not poisoned by that Kiss ;D.

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  17. I knew the impostor would do something like that to cause trouble.

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    1. Technically she doesn't expect to cause any trouble with that kiss. She did it just for fun.

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    2. Is she just manipulating Aladdin or is she attracted to him?

      Cassim's appearance was funny.

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    3. None of them... She is just playing with him. Like if he was a toy.

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  18. Oh no she didn't! Anyway, it's really cool to see Cassim in the comic! XD

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  19. WHAT IS JASMINE GOING TO THINK WHEN SHE FINDS OUT ABOUT THE KISS?!

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  20. That fake Aurora is really unpredictable XD Now Aladdin will be tortured because he loves Jasmine but Fake Aurora kissed him D:
    And Aladdin's dad cameo is great, I like almost all of the characters related to Aladdin.
    Love this comic! <3 Can't wait to see more about this chapter and the seven deadly sins :o

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    1. Thanks! But they are not the deadly sins, just the sins.

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  21. Uh oh... Aladdin's blushing >.< I love Jasmine but I think Aurora is prettier than her, so I think lust will be the first sin... Or maybe not, because that was just a kiss.

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    1. Exactly. It's just a kiss. I think Aurora is the prettiest Disney princess :).

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    2. Same here. I find all the Disney princesses pretty in their own way, but Aurora is the most beautiful to me.

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  22. 7 sins? Well, so...
    Berthalda -----> Wrath
    Grimhilde -----> Envy
    Tremaine ------> Pride
    Vanessa -------> Sloth
    Tanned Woman ---> Avarice
    Little Girl ----------> Gluttony
    Carmilla -----------> Lust.
    And Maleficent is the real enemy :D

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    1. Sorry but you are wrong in all your suppositions...

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    2. Damn it :( Well, I've tried xD Love the style of this comic, btw, is really classy and neat.

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  23. Ok, that was unexpected! Poor Agrabah... O.O
    But I must admit that Berthalda scares me a lot more that Philip D:!

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    1. Berthalda is really spooky, more than dark philip from my own point of view.

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  24. Well Jasmine, she is not a princess but a dead and evil prince. Good news? :/

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    1. They are really good news for Jasmine for sure :D.

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  25. OMG Zombie Phillip actually kissed Aladdin??????!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    1. Ok, I haven`t realized that until now XD JAJAJAJAJAJAJAJ

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  26. Could the monster Phillip be a creation of Maleficent? Or is it more connected to Berthalda since the chapter has been focusing on her a lot?

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    1. Your theories are both really probable :D.

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  27. I always thought that Philip has a repressed sexuality

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    1. Well...his hairstyle is not very manly.

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    2. Those hands also look feminine. I wonder...

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  28. Are aladdin and Cassim gonna die?

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    1. Well that doesn't help me ;)

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    2. I suposse they cannot talk about that type of spoilers xD

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  29. Robin Williams died today. I watched Aladdin in his honor. Seeing Genie brought feelings of heartbreak.

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  30. That red-headed lady in the last panel of page 11- is that tremaine?

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  31. Who the heck is Evil Phillip!!! He must be some kind of monster than Maleficent created.

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  32. DarleenEnchanted12 August 2014 at 10:33

    Evil Phillip in Aurora disguise... How wonderful... I forgot about him. xDDD
    But now we're sure Maleficent didn't kiss Aladdin. :3
    I wonder who's that red-haired lady... Is that Lady Tremaine?
    I haven't seen her since 'Broken glass' chapters. And she also said there her friend (definitely Maleficent) is waiting for her. Maybe she became young again...

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    1. Maleficent never would kiss anyone for nothing. She is a prideful woman, that kind of attitude is against her way of being. The red haired lady is a younger version of Lady Tremaine.

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    2. DarleenEnchanted13 August 2014 at 11:04

      Good to know. That's one of many things that makes me love Maleficent. :3
      Cool, younger Tremaine looks gorgeous. <3

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  33. Seven sins? Snow White, Cinderella, Aurora, Jasmine, Ariel, Belle, and Red Rose, isn't it right? Hehe. Anyway, will Elsa and Anna appear in this story? :)

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    1. Sonne and Breadfly have already explained several times they're not writing in any of the princesses after Tiana. They hate the aesthetics of the CGI films, and they dislike the characters. Rapunzel, Merida, Anna, and Elsa are NOT gonna be in this story. Characters they have said will eventually appear are Alice, Peter Pan and Wendy, Mulan, Giselle, and Tiana.

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    2. And also Pocahontas.

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    3. Jane, tarzan, Esmeralda,the blue fairy and another disney characters will appear too

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    4. Will Hercules and Meg appear too??

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  34. ZOMBIE PHILLIP KISSED ALADDIN?! A MAN KISSED A MAN?! O.O

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    1. well, that's not something so awkward now a days... Technically Dark philip is not a man but a monster, He has no soul, and when he kissed Aladdin he was Aurora…

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  35. Ohhh Berthalda has it out for Ursula...

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  36. I just simply love Young Lady Tremaine, are you going to give her a name? and a background story?

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    1. She will have a name and a backfround story ;).

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    2. For some reason Katherine comes to me as a possibility for her name. Odds are its not but still.

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    1. Really? When I created her I thought that everyone would hate her. Good news for Berthalda!

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    2. She's very diabolical which makes her a great villain. She's the kind that has a personality you hate but as far as villains go, she's great at being one.

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  38. I always thought monster Phillip was a figment of Aurora's imagination or her nightmares (kinda like Freddy Krueger). So weird to see him messing around in Agrabah. The fact that he is looking for the glass slipper makes me think he has some kind of alliance with the other villains, because Maleficent wants the slipper.

    Also its looking like Carmilla might be the real mastermind behind everything. At first I thought it was Maleficent but now she is saying Carmilla needs Ursula, otherwise Maleficent would get rid of her. So it seems Carmilla is pulling the strings here.

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    1. Carmilla brought together all the villains so she is actually the leader of all them.

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    2. Does she realize they are evil? Or is it because she can't hate anyone, she doesn't see that they are the bad guys. The thought of a princess helping the villains against other princesses is funny because you wouldn't expect that to happen.

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  39. I thought that you said Jasmine would be the main character of this chapter, but she was in only one page :(

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    1. She wil appear again. This chapter will be very long.

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  40. Poor Ursula o.o...
    But anyway... Go go go Rose, kill the witch, kill the witch, kill the witch!!

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  41. " Little Kraken" OH DEAR GOD I'M DEFINITELY IN LOVE WITH BERTHALDA :'D
    And Rose looks so bad*ss! Go Rose!!!!

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    1. Berthalda is unable to hold her tongue. She always says what she thinks. And Rose... well she is really tired about everything.

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    2. Well, after all she's been through I can't blame her :c

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  42. When will we see Argus again? I love him ID
    I want to know more about these new characters!

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    1. Argus will appear in the next chapters, will know more about Hilda and Quetzal soon.

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  43. Aurora is wanting payback.

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  44. I wonder if Aurora will try to kill Maleficent...

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  45. Ah so nice to see the real Aurora again. It feels like its been a while since we last saw her. Interesting that she didn't tell them Maleficent controlled her to kill Phillip.

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    1. Aurora has been really disturbed since philip's death. She hasn't told anything to anyone.

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  46. Aurora with a crossbow? That's so badass! And poor Ursula...

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    1. And Aurora looks really confortable with that crossbow! and about Ursula... well... She always does what she wishes.

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  47. In every group of villains, there is always one person that is treated terribly. In this case, it's Ursula.

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    1. And she came the last one, but there is a reason why everyone treats Ursula so badly.

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  48. What does Ursula mean by that golden apple?

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    1. The golden apple helps Ursula to recuperate her original form.

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  49. Since when Lady Tremaine is a redhead? At the beginning of the "Cinderella" film, it is obviously shown that she had either dark brown or black hair. Still, I like her design though in TLCT :)

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    1. If you look closely at this pic you will see Lady tremaine has a grizzled hair even the first time she appears in the movie (when she looks younger), a darker grizzled hair, but grizzled after all. And her eyebrows are reddish.
      http://images2.fanpop.com/image/photos/11700000/Lady-Tremaine-lady-tremaine-11758637-720-480.jpg

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    2. That does change things. I always thought Drizella looked the most like her mom, but in this case it is actually Anastasia.

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  50. Is monster Phillip working together with the other villains?

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    1. We will know about that very soon :)

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  51. Aurora looks lovely with her hair braided!! :D

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    1. She can change her hairsyle too ;)

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    2. Will both Belle and Jasmine get their hair braided as well? We already saw Ariel, Snow, and recently Aurora's, all hairs are braided, while Cinderella's shown in the film.

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  52. Snow White looks DAZZLING in the book! The truly fairest of them all :D!

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    1. I agree. When I saw that picture of Snow White, I was blown away. Absolutely gorgeous.

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  53. Do you dislike Prince Phillip? Is that why you decided to kill him in the story and make a evil monster version of him?

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    1. We (sonne and me) like Phillip, a lot. But his dead was something really necessary for this story.

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  54. Ooooohhh, did Aurora want to go somewhere??? This is getting very interesting! :D

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    1. She wants to go to to forbidden mountain to face up to Maleficent.

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  55. hmmm i wonder who's the magic healer..... is it quetzal?

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  56. So the next swordman who will wield the sword will get Aurora's skills?... Poor guy.

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  57. I'm sure the healer will be Snow White

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  58. I have the weird feeling (and it may be wrong) that Aurora will represent the sin of Wrath.

    Or that the villains represent them somehow.

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    1. Aurora is not represented by any sin. You will know more about this in the future :D.

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  59. I know he is a man, but monster Phillip really looks gorgeous as Aurora! (L)

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    1. I think he looks even more gorgeous than the real Aurora xD.

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  60. Evil Aurora's clothes are red or pink? In the desert they look reddish but in this page they look more pink or is it just me?
    The art is getting better and better, so beautiful!

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    1. Her arabian clothes always has been pink. The look reddish in the desert by the light effects.

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  61. Merlin doesn't seem to believe her. I'm totally sure he knows she's lying. But why is Aurora acting that way?

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    1. It's not easy to trick to Merlín. And Aurora.. well she is a victim of the posttraumatic stress.

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  62. This the second time the glass slipper is about to get stolen. What will happen this time? :O

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  63. I'm just guess if the healer will be Cinderella because she will use wand and it could heal to princesses. And also Aurora will be the one who meet to Cinderella and Alice, isn't it? :)

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  64. Jasmine is aware that Briar Rose is a fake. Knowing her, she probably left the slipper out to lure the impostor. I bet this next scene will show Jasmine confronting her. Can't wait to see how that goes.

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    1. You will know very soon what happens next :).

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  65. Badass Jasmine! Gotta love her xD

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    1. She looks really awesome with the dagger from my own point of view ;D.

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  66. Oh noooo!! Next update please??!! :O

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  68. "Hello, my name is Jasmine. You kissed my husband. Prepare to die."

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  69. is the magical healer an oc or disney's character?

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  70. It's getting very intense. :D

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  71. I knew Jasmine would show herself like that. I love it when she gets badass like in the TV series. That's the main reason why she's my favorite princess :)

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  72. I love seeing Jasmine so fierce.

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  73. I wonder if Jasmine will be able to beat evil Phillip in hand-to-hand combat...

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    1. well I think Jasmine has a considerable disadvantage against Evil Phillip D:. He is a monster after all.

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  74. NO! DON'T KILL OFF JASMINE!

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    1. Sonne is planning to kill her in the next panel but dont worry I'm going to make intercession for her :D. (I was kidding)

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    2. I thought all 6 original Disney Princesses will survive 'till the end. Please make them do. It's about them after all. I'd love to see how all 6 will eventually meet each other and fighting together against the villains. Speaking of which, will both Gaston and Jafar make appearances soon?

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    3. lol she said she was kidding xD

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    4. I know, but still... Oh well, I'm looking forward to read whatever they come up with :)

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    5. I highly doubt they would kill of any of the princesses, simply because of that fact that this is their story. Now secondary characters like the princes' and other side characters...haha they are anything goes :P let the massacre begin!!!! >:D

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  75. Will we ever see Peter pa. And tinker bell? I know Alice will be showing up so I wondered if Peter would too.

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  76. Whoa. Things just got real.

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  77. We finally see the entirety of Jasmine's outfit for this chapter. It's really pretty.

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  78. KILL THAT BASTARD! AVENGE YOUR HUSBAND'S HONOR! ( nice outfit)

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  79. Say, you know who I think would be a cool villain to bring into this comic where Jasmine and Aladdin are concerned?

    Saleen the water elemental from the Aladdin TV series.

    http://disney.wikia.com/wiki/Saleen

    She did vow to "get" Aladdin and was thwarted on two occasions by the main characters; we never saw her again but I think it could be good to bring her back to finish what she started and to also permanently get rid of Jasmine.

    And in keeping with the 7 deadly sins motif you are working into this story, Saleen could represent Lust.

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    1. The world of Aladdin has not very much importance in this story, and the story is already finished (including all the characters that will appear into it. :) ) But thanks for your suggestions :D.

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  80. omg, omg, omg, OMGGGGGGG
    This gets better everytime!!!!!!!!

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  81. So, which world is Jasmine going to? :)

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  82. How is Monster Phillip still alive? Wasn't his head cut off by that guy with long black hair? Or is he indestructable?

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  83. It's a good thing the slipper disappears when danger is around. This time Jasmine goes along with it. I think it will take her to meet the real Aurora.

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  84. I wonder where Jasmine will end up! :O

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  85. Is the magical healer the blue fairy maybe?

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